People are suffering... and I'm stuck at the libra
The Desperate and Suffering
Suffering hearts
Harbor suffering souls
Desperation leaks out
There blood turns cold
'Save them all'
My heart pounding plea
I wait for an answer
Can you really hear me?
Watching their eyes
I know that I'm right
Inside they hide pain
They see no light
Desperation drives them
To do desperate things
I cover my ears
To block out the screams
Does anyone else
See the pain that unfolds?
Or is their ignorance
Too great to be told?
Do one thing for me
Think with much renewed vigor
When the sun sets at dusk
About who's lives should be bigger
Because so many are crying
In their lonely dark corner
And though One is watching
We should comfort the mourner
Wow, i just wrote that. I was bored (stuck at the library) and started to write. Any good? I don't know, you tell me. ciao!
GD~
3 Comments:
That is really nice. Dark, but nice. I can relate to it.
By free_thewolf, Jun 13 06 7:24 PM
It's a great poem... =0)
Somehow, i felt the poem was for me .. =D
keep up th egood work.
By glamel, Jun 14 06 9:35 PM
That sounds exoctic. I`m not really sure how ya spell it? I like that. Like a dark hole and trapped looking for a way out. We have a lot in common. I write songs,books,and poems. I am putting most of them on my blog.
By:HollyMcombs June 23 1:45
By HollyMCombs, Jun 23 06 12:37 AM