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watching you watching me (poem in this post, pleas

Watching You Watching Me

 

 

Watching you

Watching me

I see the emotions well hidden

I pray for fear to never be yours

And pain to never be felt

Feelings buried at the core

For the both of us

I know this is true

So watching you

Watching me

Is not something I totally dread

When you really care about someone

You’re not afraid to take on their pain

As chaotic as all this may seem

To Another it’s as clear as day

Then let the sun shine upon us

Because watching you

Watching me

Is as mixed as anything could be

With colors flying all around

And emotions so constricted

That air is but a dream

While all of this takes place

Only several feet away

I stand still watching you

As your silent eyes watch me

 

let me know what you think...

GD~

3 Comments:

  • Very nice poem. I go to Poetry readings at our public library.I write my own.It is very cathartic don't you think?

    By positron111, Jun 11 06 8:38 PM


  • Oh, you make me so jealous, the way you can just write a poem like that, and they are all so meaningful, great job

    By 403_soccer, Jun 11 06 10:30 PM


  • its beautiful

    By junaesque, Jun 12 06 1:28 AM







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