Story 2
This is supposed to be a story comprised entirely of a list or lists.
Remembering
An old-fashioned television made in 1987 with a tiny model of a SBD Dauntless plane, a plaid love seat with solid blue cover loosely covering, a new leather couch and recliner facing the television, three photo albums from World War II on the large lamp stand, a photo of the U.S.S. Enterprise, a plaque reading GM William Green: US Navy and vase above it with dying flowers. I watered the flowers.
Rolling walker, large dining table set for one with pill bottles invading, pot with water lines and the handle of a wooden spoon sticking out on the stove, sink half full of glasses stained from many uses, half a gallon of milk and three slices of cheese in warm refrigerator, 7 Hardy Man dinners and 3 pizzas in frozen freezer, a deer head mounted on the wall, handmade grandfather clock still swinging.
Two-month old copy of Deer and Deer Hunting magazine on nightstand, photo album with a picture of a cute couple in front of the grand canyon, unmade king sized bed which I quickly made, a closet with dress shirts and t-shirts interspersed amongst themselves, stacks of dress slacks rising from the floor, and on the dresser what I was looking for: The Last Will and Testament of Joseph Thomas Anderson Sr.

5 Comments:
Wow, that was really powerful. Thanks for sharing.
By Ingress, Mar 25 08 6:24 PM
A little masterpiece. Extremely moving.
By tobyone, Mar 26 08 12:56 AM
Very clever! nice touches.
By smpdit, Mar 26 08 2:26 AM
Hey, that's great! Very nice job!
By TAKROM, Mar 26 08 4:55 PM
As I said previously, I really thought this was excellent and thought provoking
By roxymary, Apr 01 08 7:22 PM